User talk:Tonykattvc

Welcome
Hi, welcome to AlternateWorld Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the The Vireness page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Blaster395 (Talk) 15:59, January 8, 2010

Your nation is too advanced
Try to make it less advanced The technology in it seems 2100 level, it should be at most 2020 level.

Well, the nation survived The Decimation
So, they've had another 300,000 years to develop their technology :| Tonykattvc 22:15, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is supposed to be set in modern times. Even if they survived the decimation, at the time of the decimation technology was equivalent to 2030 and you would not be able to build a space station that fits more than 100 people.--Blaster395 22:25, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Also what the hell...window.onload = function{window.parent.CKEDITOR._["contentDomReadywpTextbox1"]( window );}--Blaster395 22:26, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

The Confederation was already ahead at the time that The Union was made, so it would've had more of an edge and could've built a habitat station that housed about 30,000 people. Then they slowly rebuilt and colonized their tract of land near The Scar and multiplied to 350 Million. I don't see why it doesn't make sense. Tonykattvc 22:29, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

The land near the scar isnt large enough to support 350 million. Even if they had a huge space station, no matter what the size their technology would be impacted severely by the event. I have made some edits which I hope are fine with you. They give it the right technology without editing too much.--Blaster395 22:32, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, those event were, uh, unimaginative, so I replaced them with events that are interesting but led to the same basic event.

I changed the other species to a virus, humans are the only sentient species and having another muddles things up I think the article is fine now.

Well, I thought of a virus, but that really wasn't too fun to make, so I made more another race. They keep to themselves in The Scar, though, and really aren't seen much. Tonykattvc 23:18, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is it ok if that is a tribe of humans?--Blaster395 23:18, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Eh, why not? Tonykattvc 23:19, January 8, 2010 (UTC)